Fr34k SOTW Entry - xbox 360 fan community

Fr34k Sh0 · 03-19-2008, 10:22 AM

I am not sure how I feel about this one, some parts turned out and some didn't.

C&C!!!!!

Original:

V2:

i m r phail · 03-19-2008, 06:46 PM

great flow and the colors match. the lighting should be on the other side of the focal though. also, i think the left isn't busy enough.

JTON · 03-19-2008, 06:52 PM

too much of the render is like faded...but that text roxorz ..lol

Fr34k Sh0 · 03-19-2008, 08:00 PM

Thanks guys, I ran out of things to make the left more busy.

i m r phail · 03-19-2008, 09:50 PM

I would say drop opac of the blur, erase parts to make it look better and place a good c4d in there for flow and erase parts of it. A good thing to try is putting a twirl filter on a c4d.

Fr34k Sh0 · 03-19-2008, 09:56 PM

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Originally Posted by i m r phail

I would say drop opac of the blur, erase parts to make it look better and place a good c4d in there for flow and erase parts of it. A good thing to try is putting a twirl filter on a c4d.

Thanks, I will try that tomorrow and if it turns out better I will post it.